Wow! Loved this story. Took me there with you in the barn jumping into your secret hideaway with Funyans and strawberry pop — we called it soda back East :) what an enchanting childhood experience. I loved how you did the gradually shortening sentences too. Very clever!
Awe, Suzanne, thank you so much for the feedback!! I believe you are the first comment anyone has ever left me on the app. I really appreciate you taking the time. That’s so amazing my words were able to transport you. I really enjoyed writing this one.
Wow! Loved this story. Took me there with you in the barn jumping into your secret hideaway with Funyans and strawberry pop — we called it soda back East :) what an enchanting childhood experience. I loved how you did the gradually shortening sentences too. Very clever!
Awe, Suzanne, thank you so much for the feedback!! I believe you are the first comment anyone has ever left me on the app. I really appreciate you taking the time. That’s so amazing my words were able to transport you. I really enjoyed writing this one.
The first comment?! What an honor! 😍